Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Rajnigandha

A fragrance that fluttered
into the wings of light
travelled from the stars
into the flowers of night.

9 comments:

  1. Hey nice one Sudeep...but if u elaborate little bit more then it would be more nice…

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  2. thanks anita.. somehow, i could not extend it further.. that would take away the essence of these 4 lines

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  3. sudeep, you have turned into a master of short poems.read this earlier, reread it and loved it once again.

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  4. it's so beautiful your poems again and again and again...
    short and sweet :)

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  5. Meant will read them again and again and again...

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  7. yeah like everyone did, i too read it before.....and reread it...so very beautiful..like a fairytale...

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